Licorice Allsorts Esplanade
You covered your eyes I couldn't see you Commas in the sky What a warm ride Open the window It's stifling in here The stairwell said come With a saxophone entrance Stars under your fingernails Paint...
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thank you dear friend, your comment goes well with coffee ~lily
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Wolves with lamb-fur lined coats Standing on owl's heads To get to the stars ~ I have known them, too, hon....but you paint them to perfection here this one took me on quite the journey....and there...
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Could you hold a sprig of blossom Without dying from the beauty? For every death we gain a life Tap the sides; open flow The page is in strips Paper promises Turn a leaf I am around the corner I wish...
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Kelly, I have to admit there is much here I don't get at all but, I sure love not getting it. I'm going to have to keep at it and hope my brain wakes up enough to ride the waves. The poem reads...
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This moves through from one thought to the next with such breathlessness .... I think that adds to the appeal of it. It's just like the mind works Loved this... Wolves with lamb-fur lined coats...
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Re reading this I capture and glean the feeling. I too wish I could hear you read this aloud Kelly! I get a sadness that sears into my mind. jd-
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Dayum Lady... you pack a punch ~smile~ I love your writing! Wonderfully etched!!! Huggs, Jo
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Truly terrific journey through the absurd, dear poetess!! "The Barbie dolls painted signs In new shimmer gloss 'Give me money, I am pretty' " A really wonderful read today!
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I love the imaginery... it's very intense and powerful!
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Poets all, Sasha, Sammie, Andy, Jan, JD, Jo, Eric and VenusHalley.. many thanks for taking a stroll with my morning fog thoughts.. a special Welcome with bells on to VenusHalley, hope you enjoy your...
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Lily, this is like fingerpainting with words. Very intriguing poem, lots going on here.
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Hi Cass, i like that 'finger painting with words' great to see you at the Motel again, we've missed you! many thanks Cass.. ~lily
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Lily, why thank you. I've been workshopping & submitting to zines. That, and dealing with life I also wanted to mention again that the line about the commas in the sky made me think of clouds.
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LOL, at Cass stuttering. Kelz, this is fun to travel through again and again. I'm hoping you bring us some more real soon. Hope all is well munchkin, andy
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Cass, clouds was what i was tinkin tankU Andy, i hope so too ~lily
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How did I miss this grand journey falling into your thoughts and images Could you hold a sprig of blossom Without dying from the beauty? In admiration Hugs
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~Lily~ Love each vividly brushed thought and emotion throughout Most enjoyed the read today ~ I look forward to reading more from your pen~
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i just drown in the beauty when i see a tree of blossoms maggie, and welcome back, or should i say 'calor en su vuelta' thankU Alana, i'm still smitten with your first love poem ~lily
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:Lily ~ I really love this. So many great lines, I was unable to tag all my favorites. I know I'll be back to read this one. It's just packed. Did I say I love it? Yup. My best,
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as packed as a large suitcase for a weekend trip lol.. thanks Cherri ~lily
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